Hollypaw;; StormClan Apprentice

[Jezebella]

Name ;; Hollypaw
Gender ;; female
Age ;; seven moons
Allegiance ;; StormClan
Rank ;; apprentice
Appearance ;; She is a beautiful grey she- cat. Her pelt has a silky smooth texture. She is a short- haired cat, so she isn't puffy like some cats. She has beautiful amber eyes and is a beautiful cat. She will grow up to be a fine she-cat.
Personality ;; She is very laid back. She loves adventures and will sneak away just to get it. She is sweet and kind. She is mean around toms, though, only because she gets nervous. She is patient, but can be stubborn at times. She is strong hearted and determined.
History ;; She was born in to Stormclan 7 moons ago. Or so she thought. She was actually born a rogue, but she lost her mother when a badger came by. All of her brothers and sisters died, but because she was out wandering around, she was safe. She wandered alone for a few days, and then she finally was rescued by a Stormclan warrior. She is now being raised to be a warrior herself. She hopes to be the best there is.
Family ;; dead
Mate ;; too young
Picture ;; link!
Other ;; Sorry. I haven't roleplayed cats in a while.

[» ᵮeᵲnȿtar]

(it's okay that you haven't role-played with kitties in a while--you're doing okay so far.)

There is only one thing, though--in the Personality section, it said she is mean around stallions?
XD Maybe you meant toms?

[Windy]

The only problem I really see is that you forget to capitalize the 'C' in Clans. So it's supposed to be StormClan. Other than that, it's fine with me.

Also, if you type out 'seven' instead of 7, it looks ten times better. Just saying. It's perfect.

[Jezebella]

Oh my jeez! That's embarrassing! I was actually thinking of a horse that I rp. Sorry. I fixed it though!(:

[» ᵮeᵲnȿtar]

XD That's okay. Nice job--Accepted!